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Hi, %$firstname$%

If you can get this page to convert, I'll go 50-50 with you, with certain provisions:

http://www.naturopathicremedyforkidneystones.com

Thank You
Truman Keesey

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Permalink Reply by Hank Rosen on November 1, 2007 at 10:38pm: Truman,

I hate to be the one to rain on your parade, but your sales page has got to be one of the worst I have ever had the misfortune of clicking on. It's a train wreck from top to bottom and leaves no mystery as to why it doesn't convert to sales.

My intention is not to "dis" but to enlighten.

To your success,
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Permalink Reply by Truman Keesey on November 2, 2007 at 12:40am: Thank you Hank, it is actually refreshing to get a truthful answer for a change.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Truman Keesey on November 2, 2007 at 3:22am: A message for Hank's "audience":

I am Jacob, you are Esau -- I do not schlep for you.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Hank Rosen on November 2, 2007 at 3:38am: A message to Truman's "psychotherapist":

Up the dosage -- ASAP.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Truman Keesey on November 2, 2007 at 12:59pm: I could have trusted you if you hadn't tried to cover up.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Truman Keesey on November 2, 2007 at 1:14pm: Now see what you've done: [click link]; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Truman Keesey on December 12, 2007 at 12:01am: It's starting to convert. .6% for the last 295 visits. I still want a j.v. partner. If you can get it up to 2% I'll run the traffic prodedures in the IMC insider secrets course on it.

Also having trouble with formatting. In Dreamweaver there is a white margin on left and no bolding in the paragraphs. When I published it, part of the margin disappeared, and the text became bold. I don't know how to fix this.

Thank You For Your Consideration
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Permalink Reply by Annie on February 17, 2008 at 8:32pm: Truman,

Have you ever had kidney stones? They are not fun at all!

How's your website doing now? Have you had any success with it?

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Permalink Reply by Truman Keesey on February 19, 2008 at 1:34am: This was back in 60's. Well an md psychiatrist said I was in early stages, and I stopped beer and ate bananas, and the pain left -- and so my "mentor" (2006) said to do a kidneystone site. Then when I did the research, I don't think it was kidneystones, just a lack of potassium and possibly of fluid, causin slight pain.

I think the problem in the site may have been in lack of testimonials or of md spokesperson. The content itself is probably the best available because I have a gift for siftin information.

Also, the stats seem to show that the visitors are not good prospects, they may not be in immediate pain, nor have a problem but they want the info free for whatever reason.

I let the domain registration expire, but still have the html, and I could host it on another domain. Domain names are not as important as they used to be, in seo. Besides that, the old domain name was very klunky, chosen by wordtracker kei, which promptly dropped by 2/3 as soon as I registered the domain. Like, I think from 250 to 80 in 4-6 weeks.

However, the head of the mentorin team said there was a good cluster of related keywords with decent scores, so it should attract targetted prospects. 'Deed I don't know what the problem was.; ▶ Reply to This